Because of the problems with the previously shoot we had another shoot in which we aimed to break the original first shot into two shots. We had to film this at a different location for practical reasons. The lighting is more effective and realistic because we filmed by a window in which natural light is coming through creating the impression of morning. All of the shots are in focus this time and the logo and sponsorship slogan are composed more successfully and the fonts look more professional. The non-diegetic sound does't sound very professional but I think that is down to our limited recording technology (we used iMovie recorder). Another criticism is that the advert is still quite boring. This is the nature of the plot (it lacks action and features a mundane daily task), and I don't think we could have avoided this.
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